of mental contemplation and sighs.

zigzag infinity

neural capacity firing high

hair fleek as sunshine

silence steady in the sublime

rustle in the ruffle of pleats

on thighs

a magnificence in simplicity

of observation’s heights

to earthly contemplation

and mental sighs

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Author: gerbilette

Write, edit, be. Write, love, poetry.

1 thought on “of mental contemplation and sighs.”

  1. I really like how you use a few words and particular line breaks to shape the poem and capture certain moments in “of mental contemplation and sighs.” Also, I would suggest that you consider elaborating the atmosphere surrounded and perceived by the speaker because texture and physicality come alive in this piece, and I think that you could and should expand on that more. Excellent dimension here!

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